lørdag den 6. november 2010

Kra - Amaoto wa Chopin no shirabe lyrics translation

Original title: 雨音はショパンの調べ [Amaoto wa Chopin no shirabe] 
Translation: ”The Rainfall is Chopin's Melody”

Note: This song was near to impossible to translate>< My Japanese teacher said that it was too poetic and, since there are no complete sentences at all in this song, there were a lot of parts of it that she didn't even understand (*゜▽゜)ノ However, I did my best! Please bear with me if it's not completely right^^;

Here goes nothing;
 
耳をふさぐ 指をくぐり
心 痺(シビ)らす 甘い調べ
止めて あのショパン
彼には もう会えないの
Rainy Days
 断ち切れず 窓を叩かないで
Rainy Days
 気休めは 麻薬 Ah—♥

Filling up my ears, slipping through my fingers
A soft melody makes my heart go numb
Please stop playing that Chopin (1)
I will never see him again

Rainy days~ since the windows are blocked, you can’t hear the rain drumming on the glass (2)
Rainy days~ peace of mind is soothing
Ah—♥

ひざの上に ほほをのせて
「好き」とつぶやく 雨の調べ
やめて そのショパン
想い出なら いらないわ
Rainy Days
 特別の人でなくなるまで
Rainy Days
 暗号のピアノ Ah—♥

I rest my chin on my knees (3)
and murmur “Love,” into the soft melody of the rain
Please stop playing this Chopin (1)
I don’t need these memories

Rainy days~ when you become unimportant to me
Rainy days~ the key of the piano (4)
Ah—♥

Rainy Days
 断ち切れず 影にふり返れば
Rainy Days
 たそがれの部屋は Ah--
Rainy Days
 特別の人は 胸に生きて
Rainy Days
 合鍵を回す Chopin(ショパン) Ah—♥

Rainy days~ I cannot break away. I have to look back at the shadows
Rainy days~ the twilight in this room is -- Ah—♥
Rainy days~ this special person lives in my chest
Rainy days~ it all revolves around Chopin (5)
Ah—♥


(1) The literary translation of this sentence is “Please stop that Chopin” (since it says “止めて” and later やめて”). This, however, seems… incompressible and weird to me(*--)I take “そのショパン” to be “the tunes of Chopin” because… well, Chopin, in himself, is already gone. His music is what’s left. And Keiyuu keeps mentioning tunes and melodies so… I chose to interpret on the words and added verbs as I felt appropriate^^;

(2) This is... not right >__<” I took “断ち切れず” to mean (with ””) that the window is blocked. And thus; 窓を叩かないで” (+ “rainy days”). Like… he can’t see or hear the rain drumming on the window because it’s blocked. Or something to that extent. 

It’s a really hard sentence(*;;___;;)

My teacher couldn’t even translate it >-< She said she couldn’t really understand what he really meant here. Her suggestion for a translation was; “I cannot break off. Don’t beat the windows, please,” - but that seems incomprehensible too, right?><

(3) I know “ほほ” is “cheek” but it’s more sensible in English to say you “rest your chin against something” when it’s “upon something” (in most cases anyway). If it had been “against something” cheek would have been fine. So I changed it^^”

(4) I know “暗号” is more like “code” or “password” but I think “key” makes more sense. “key” can also be a “code” or “password” but the tangents on a piano are also called “keys”, so it’s a nice little wordplay in English^^”

(5) I know “合鍵” is like “spare key” and “回す” is “to turn/to rotate” but I took it from the context to say that Chopin is the most important thing (the key) and everything revolves around him (回す). 

Suggestions or correction? Please comment^^

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All lyrics translations uploaded here are of course owned by me (though the lyrics in themselves are owned by the respectful artists). If you want to use or re-post my translations, please ask permission beforehand. Credit is, of course, always given to me. (*゜▽゜)ノ゛ ♥ ♥

A special thank you to the amazing Yuka san for all her help  ♥ ♥

onsdag den 3. november 2010

Matenrou Opera - Kaze no tori lyrics translations

Original title: 摩天楼オペラ - 風の鳥 [Matenrou Opera - Kaze no tori]
Matenrou Opera means “Skyscraper Opera” and “Kaze no tori” means ”Bird of the wind

消えそうな優しさこの体を映して
明日も夢を見てる 孤独の海で

The vanishing tenderness of this body casts a shadow on me (1)
Tomorrow I will also see this dream in the sea of loneliness (2)

あの日唄った 声はくもになり
震えたこの風だけを 胸にあずけて

The voice which sang that day became the clouds
Now I can only enclose the trembling wind inside my heart (3)

さぁ飛び立とう 碧い翼広げ
たとえ光が見えなくなっても

Now, let's expand our lapis wings and fly away, (4)
even though we can’t see the light anymore

砕け散る想いは 涙をあつめて
全て この海に溶かしてしまおう

My broken dreams are reflected in my tears (5)
I’m going to melt completely into this sea (6)


月の明かりに 傷を照らせば
また一つ君は強くなれるから

When the moonlight illuminates your weaknesses,
you can be strong once again

さぁ翔び立とう 母なる空え
消えたくもの影 どこまでも探して

Now you seem to become the Mother of the sky as you fly away, (7)
looking everywhere for the shadows of the evaporated skies (8)

悲しみの流れを 心で受けとめたら
海の色 深く鮮やかに見えた
いつか輝く 陽差しを待ちわびて
必ず季節は変わるから

When the stream of sorrow took over my heart,
the color of the sea looked brilliant (9)
Someday the sparkling rays of sun will have to wait,
because the seasons will change as they always do

大空高く 舞い上がれ 青く
遙かに続く この時代と共に

(You) soar to the high heavens and become lapis (10)
Far away in the distance, we continue to share these days...

君と唄った風の中で
遠い過去の闇を抱しめて

I used to sing with you in the wind
Now I embrace the shady darkness of our past (11)


(1) It doesn’t say “on me” but I take it from the context that it’s what he means^^”

(2) It doesn’t say “this dream” but… from the context I believe he’s talking about a particular dream. Maybe the one he’s right now/right then? Anyway, this is my translation=^.^=

(3) I changed the meaning of “だけ”, which I take to mean “only” here, a little. I know it’s supposed to be like… “I enclose only the trembling wind inside my heart” or something to that extent. Context-wise, however, that doesn’t make a whole lot of sense to me. I feel like he encloses the wind in his heart because he can’t enclose the voice which sang. If that makes any sense…  (>__<●
But, seeing it like that, “だけ”  doesn’t translate very well and I felt it was best to change it a bit to match the rest of the paragraph.

I also added a “now” to enhance understanding^^”

(4) “Lapis” is an intense blue color of a certain precious stone by the same name (it’s gorgeous I think! ). I know it says “aoi”, just normal blue, but I think it’s more poetic to change it to lapis^^”

(5) I know “あつめて” means ”to collect” or ”to gather” but in English it makes a lot more sense to say ”to reflect”. It comes down to the same meaning, really, as the point is that his broken dreams are in his tears – hence he’s crying because his dreams are broken. At least that’s how I interpret it=^^”=

(6) This sentence was weird to me. It doesn’t say exactly what’s going to “溶かして” but I interpret it to be him who is going to melt and form a sea of tears since he’s crying. I take the sea he mentions to be the sea from earlier. The sea of loneliness. So, it makes sense that when he cries and reflects upon his memories, he melts into the sea of loneliness. At least I think so ^^”

The しまおう” is volitional form, however. So, Yuksa san told me, it can be (and probably should be); ”let’s melt them completely into the sea” ^^

(7) The text reads “母なる空” which literally means “the Mother of the sky“. It seems weird to me, and probably you too, but my sensei explained it like this; “母なる大地” and “母なる海” are famous (common) Japanese expressions. “母なる大地” means “the Mother Earth”, and “母なる海” means “the Mother Sea”. But “母なる空” is uncommon since we (humans) don’t see “the sky” as a mother of our origin. But, somehow, Sono wanted to see sky as a mother in his song and so he made up the term “母なる空”. (*--) 


Poetic and beautiful in a weird way^^”

(8)えたくも” literally means ”vanished clouds” but I thought ”evaporated skies” sounded a lot more poetic and paints a more beautiful picture of the skies. So, the literal translation of whole sentence is something like; “looking everywhere for the shadows of the vanished clouds” but I think my translation is more poetic(*d)

(9) The second line, “海の色 深く鮮やかに見えた”, is a little out of context to me. I know he’s talking about the sea he’s mentioned before, that part is fine, but the whole “will look brilliant”… I don’t really get it>< Why will it look "brilliant"?... - When you say “will look brilliant” it sounds like a positive thing. It’s positive that something will become clearer… But why is it positive that sorrow will take over his heart? – that’s the action that leads to the positive “will look brilliant”?

Anyway, here is my sensei’s explanation of that line: when we are not mentally strong enough, we cannot take some unexpected fact or sadness in the right way. Only when we are ready to face the sadness, we can comprehend it in our minds properly. Then it would be kind a positive thing, wouldn’t it? I think “受け止める” does not mean just “take” but  it also includes the feeling of having to “face to something”.

You can decide for yourself if it makes sense to you^^”

(10) I put parentheses around “you” because it’s not necessary to include a subject in this line. “上がれ” is kind of an imperative form, so the sentence could also just read; “Soar to high heavens and become lapis”.

(11) Added a “now” for understanding (*--)

Suggestions or correction? Please comment^^

Pssst---Interested in hearing the song? It's uploaded here but of course you have to follow all rules and delete it after 24 hours and buy the CDs from the artist and all that yada yada yada(>__<●

All lyrics translations uploaded here are of course owned by me (though the lyrics in themselves are owned by the respectful artists). If you want to use or re-post my translations, please ask permission beforehand. Credit is, of course, always given to me. (*゜▽゜)ノ゛ ♥ ♥

A special thank you to the amazing Yuka san for all her help  ♥ ♥

fredag den 29. oktober 2010

Aoi - Concord lyrics translation

揺らめく光に
溶け合う旋律
見上げた空へと
祈りを捧げている

The flickering light melts together with a melody
I raise my eyes to the skies and offer a prayer (1)

ねぇ叶うのなら
そうこのまま
想い照らして
描かせて

Hey, in case my wish comes true
just like this
I feel it shining on me
and I let a picture paint in my mind (2)

降りそそぐ
月の明かりが輝いて
部屋を染めあげる
あの日のように

The moonlight is lighting up this room
and dyeing it in sparkles
It’s like that day


願いは遥かな時を越えて
永遠を奏で彩り続ける
鐘の音が街を包んだなら
この瞳を閉じ
あなたのもとへと

Wishes pass through in distant moments and keep coloring eternity (3)
When the sound of bells is covering the streets, I close my eyes and then I’m with you


ねぇ過ちさえ
そう懐かしい
変わらずにまだ
愛しいでしょう

Hey, I even miss my mistakes
I haven’t changed them yet
You love them, don’t you?


窓辺から眺めた景色
色褪せず
はしゃぐ声がまだ
あの日のように

The scenery outside my window haven’t faded in color
I still hear the voice which makes my spirit rise
It’s like that day


眩しい季節が胸にあふれ
届かずにまた消えていく
いつかまた出逢えると信じて
この心の中刻んでおくから

The radiant seasons make my chest overflow
Everything unfulfilled vanishes and goes away
The thought that someday we will meet again
is engraved in my heart


願いは遥かな時を越えて
永遠を奏で彩り続ける
鐘の音が街を包んだなら
この瞳を閉じ
あなたのもとへと
 
Wishes pass through in distant moments and keep coloring eternity (3)
When the sound of bells is covering the streets, I close my eyes and then I’m with you


揺らめく光に
溶け合う旋律
見上げた空へと
祈りを捧げている

The flickering light melts together with a melody
I raise my eyes to the skies and offer a prayer (1)


(1) This sentence could also be past tense (because of the "た"-ending on "見上げた") but, to me, context suggests present tense. Furthermore, "ている", too, suggests the fact that the whole sentence is present tense and thus (since two positive beat a negative and all that) it is present tense.

(2) Since there are very few particles in this paragraph (if any at all), it’s hard to decide who does what etc. However, due to the context, this is how I translated it =^.^=
I got another suggestion from my sensei saying; "Please shine on my wish (or mind) and let me dream it" – whatever suits you. I think both are beautiful and in tune with the song^^

(3) In this paragraph he mentions “playing an instrument” in the same context as the wishes "color eternity" - which doesn’t make much sense (>__<● I left out the playing-part but please note that it is mentioned in there ^^” That’s the uniqueness of Japanese language for you (*--)

Suggestions or correction? Please comment^^

Pssst---Interested in hearing the song? It's uploaded here but of course you have to follow all rules and delete it after 24 hours and buy the CDs from the artist and all that yada yada yada(>__<●

All lyrics translations uploaded here are of course owned by me (though the lyrics in themselves are owned by the respectful artists). If you want to use or re-post my translations, please ask permission beforehand. Credit is, of course, always given to me. (*゜▽゜)ノ゛ ♥ ♥

A special thank you to the amazing Yuka san for all her help  ♥ ♥